Author Archives: writingfordesire

Edits for 13th Day

This part seems really awkward to me, any suggestions?   “On her thirteenth day, Marietta picked up her books eagerly, anticipating another event less lunch with Lucifer. She was the first ready to leave, and easily squeezed past everyone. Her … Continue reading

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Not Sure What To Call This, Sorry

Any one reading this could get more truth than they had, Or less than they thought I, myself am not even sure what this is Maybe it’ll be a huge confession Or make less sense than before After trying, and … Continue reading

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First Round Down

Just thought I’d share my latest accomplishment. Finished editing the full first draft of my manuscript. Time to give it back to my editor 🙂 super proud

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New World

Every month is passing by Without much direction, regardless of up or down All the plans for the past year have gone away And I dont know that I can recall any of them Then the latest grip of something … Continue reading

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Suggestions from my Editor

This is what I have for it   “I’m just telling the truth. You need to talk to someone outside the band.” “That’s none of your concern Tool.” Marietta looked at both of them and laughed uncomfortably. Stepping toward her … Continue reading

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Shattered Photos 

Listening to even my favorite songs sting So I sit in my old desk chair, Starring at words crossing the screen  They’re there but aren’t what I see Our first meeting,  That smile I fell in love with It’s still … Continue reading

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Post Mortem Hello

You still ask me how I’m doing As if you still care  And all the feelings are still brewing  Below the surface heating  Ready to break the seal Just in time for you to send that greeting  As if I … Continue reading

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