Tag Archives: Angels and Devils

Edits For My Birthday

Finally finished going through another round of edits, now I have to actually make them Advertisements

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Short Goal For 2018

Editing time and hoping to be prepped for submissions by my birthday. I have until February 16th. With me luck with my mini goal! 🙂

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Edits for 13th Day

This part seems really awkward to me, any suggestions?   “On her thirteenth day, Marietta picked up her books eagerly, anticipating another event less lunch with Lucifer. She was the first ready to leave, and easily squeezed past everyone. Her … Continue reading

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First Round Down

Just thought I’d share my latest accomplishment. Finished editing the full first draft of my manuscript. Time to give it back to my editor 🙂 super proud

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Suggestions from my Editor

This is what I have for it   “I’m just telling the truth. You need to talk to someone outside the band.” “That’s none of your concern Tool.” Marietta looked at both of them and laughed uncomfortably. Stepping toward her … Continue reading

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Playing the Game

The teacher was giving another lesson that Lucifer failed to find the useful. But, Marietta on the other hand, was taking it all in. He had never seen such an organized notebook. Each page was dated and given a title. … Continue reading

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Red flags of manipulation

When the window opened an old man stood behind it, asking for their orders. Chad spoke up first, “I’ll have a chocolate and vanilla swirl. No sprinkles.” He turned to her waiting for her order. “Oh, um, chocolate please.” The … Continue reading

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