Tag Archives: Angels and Devils

Edits for 13th Day

This part seems really awkward to me, any suggestions?   “On her thirteenth day, Marietta picked up her books eagerly, anticipating another event less lunch with Lucifer. She was the first ready to leave, and easily squeezed past everyone. Her … Continue reading

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First Round Down

Just thought I’d share my latest accomplishment. Finished editing the full first draft of my manuscript. Time to give it back to my editor 🙂 super proud

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Suggestions from my Editor

This is what I have for it   “I’m just telling the truth. You need to talk to someone outside the band.” “That’s none of your concern Tool.” Marietta looked at both of them and laughed uncomfortably. Stepping toward her … Continue reading

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Playing the Game

The teacher was giving another lesson that Lucifer failed to find the useful. But, Marietta on the other hand, was taking it all in. He had never seen such an organized notebook. Each page was dated and given a title. … Continue reading

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Red flags of manipulation

When the window opened an old man stood behind it, asking for their orders. Chad spoke up first, “I’ll have a chocolate and vanilla swirl. No sprinkles.” He turned to her waiting for her order. “Oh, um, chocolate please.” The … Continue reading

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Marietta Speaks to cats

As she walked along the kitchen cabinets checking for food supplies, the cat stayed in pace with her. Bowls and plates were in the cabinet closest to the refrigerator. The other was filled with drinking glasses and coffee mugs. She … Continue reading

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New Companion

I wanted to use a symbol for Marietta’s father, so of course for the imprisoned Devil I chose a black cat.   The keepers brought her to a small cottage. There was nothing beautiful about this place. Dead plants lined … Continue reading

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